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Post by edoksil on May 12, 2006 16:07:02 GMT -5
They were standing at the ege of building high 57 floors, talking about sunset. In one moment she was standing beside him, at the next she was falling... He tryed to reach her but it was too late, he could only watch her fall. She was falling for so long that he whished her to fall allready, it was so painfull to watch the inevedable. At last she fell, her body splashed all over the floor and that was the end of her, end of his life, his only point for living, she was dead and nothing can change that... Then he felt so free and he jumped, they will be thogeter no matter what is the cost. The last thing he saw was blood on the sidewalk, then he died....
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Post by Slane the Attractive on May 12, 2006 16:48:05 GMT -5
That's cool, but depressing. What is that from?
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Post by Erais on May 12, 2006 18:53:25 GMT -5
Yuck. Ugh. Gross. Where did you get that? Are you thinking of commiting suicide? If yuour depressed I could help, I have drepression issues.
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Post by edoksil on May 14, 2006 12:15:29 GMT -5
Thanks Slane. No Erais, I'm not depressed and I don't think to commit suicide, don't worry. :-) I wrote this story when I was sad, I's about the lost of loved one, a bit deppresing yes, but it has a happy ending, don't it? They end up together, probably on better place!
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Post by corey on Jun 25, 2006 12:57:54 GMT -5
What if they end up in hell
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Post by Ayedale the Hyper on Jan 19, 2007 23:41:31 GMT -5
wow...
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Post by wowposter on Sept 5, 2008 17:14:04 GMT -5
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Post by wowposter on Sept 10, 2008 12:40:15 GMT -5
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